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Well if its a critique you want I will give it to you, the first thing that poped out is that there is a lack of shadow in the face, and the rest of the Body has some good shadowing, 2nd thing is that I missed the braid yuna from ffx 2 has a long braid that goes nearly down to the feet and also the hoodie is lacking, well okay thats not a thing I could complain about when you google image the picture its hard to find some pictures with her where you can ee the hoodie, the other thing is that I miss some clothwrinkles espacally from the cloth on her hip, becaus its just fixed on that it should make a lot of wrinkles if you sit, the bootlace are not fully colured, the boot thats lieng on the ground has no white bootlace and last but not least the fingers on the hand you see just looks like it has just one finger, well okay in some perspective its okay to show just one finger but on this way you should see at least 2 or 3 of them well thats all I can critique.
now to the good points the positioning of the picture is great together with the whole body proprtion which, the facial features looks smooth and nice and I like this picture really much if you dont looks too much on the details, great work Kay and I hope my critique is helpfull for you